Final double page spread flatplan

This is my final double page flatplan.

I feel that this flatplan has a better layout that my initial, there is more dimension and the eye follows it better and it has more stucture. I wanted the quoteline to be more dominant on the page as that was the main topic. 

I chose to subvert away from normal conventions and have more than 1 image on my page because I thought that the image of my model sitting on the floor would look like shes sitting on the bottom of the page. I think it links back to my contents page as well; as my model on the contents is also placed similarly. 

From my feedback I choose to change the way I presented my text as Jessica said 'it looked too much like a newspaper'.